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My favorite season is Spring and Fall. The most favorite season is Fall.
The reason is that I like to wear a various of type clothes.
I enjoy wearing trench-jacket When it is fall.
I think it is very awesome! So I often wear it a various color .

I hate Summer. I have two reasons Why I hate this season.
First of all People have many sweating and it is smelling when the summer.
I have very sensitive smelling.
So I limit go outside when the Summer.

Second I have a stookie syndrome. It is appear to child When it is bitten from mosquito.
When I was bitten from mosquito , the part was so pouring and rising the temperature.
I didn’t have this syndrome when I was child.
When I was growing up , I knew that by accident.
When I was bitten from mosqutio, as soon as possible I finished my work after I went to emergency room and I had a injection.
After I always have mosquito medicine in my bag, When the summer.

My favorite season is Spring and Fall. The most favorite season is Fall.
The reason is that I like to wear a various of type clothes.
I enjoy wearing trench-jacket When it is fall.
I think it is very awesome! So I often wear it a various color .

I hate Summer. I have two reasons Why I hate this season.
First of all People have many sweating and it is smelling when the summer.
I have very sensitive smelling.
So I limit go outside when the Summer.

Second I have a stookie syndrome. It is appear to child When it is bitten from mosquito.
When I was bitten from mosquito , the part was so pouring and rising the temperature.
I didn’t have this syndrome when I was child.
When I was growing up , I knew that by accident.
When I was bitten from mosqutio, as soon as possible I finished my work after I went to emergency room and I had a injection.
After I always have mosquito medicine in my bag, When the summer.

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My favorite season is Spring and Fall. The most favorite season is Fall. The reason is that I like to wear various types of clothes. I enjoy wearing trench-jacket When it is fall.  I think it is very awesome! So I often wear them in various colors.

I hate Summer. I have two reasons Why I hate this season. First of all, People have much sweating and it is smelling during summer. I have a very sensitive smelling. So I limit to go outside when it's summer. 

Second I have a skeeter syndrome. It appears to a child when they are bitten by a mosquito. When I was bitten by mosquito, the part was so pouring and raising the temperature. I didn’t have this syndrome when I was a child. When I was growing up, I knew that by accident.  There was a time when I got bitten by a mosquito and as soon as I finished my work I went to the emergency room and had an injection. After that, I always have mosquito medicine in my bag, especially during the summer.


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