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my name is jin ah kim. i was born in 1998, September, 17 Gwang ju, Korea with my sister. yes, i'm twins. sister is my best friend, and I have a one old brother. so my family consist of mom and dad brother, sister, eang mu the parrot, me. I think that my family is closed each other. my pet eang mu has yello feathers and cute face with red cheek
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I live in Osan, Gyeonggi Province, korea. I stay in domitory during the semesters because my university that I go is in gwang ju which far away from osan. and I stay grand mather's house on every weekend in semesters, but now I stay in my home because corona virus is getting serious so vacation becomes longer.
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i'm senior in university. my major is Early Childhood Education.
So I study child welfare, early childhood education, philosophy of education, special education. I think education is something amazing. because education can change human beings into better.
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I want to speak english well. because I think that a person who speak english well looks cool. so I want to be cool. actually, I don't study hard. and I don't like study very much. but I'm writing english because I want to speak english well. please help me
thank you for listening

my name is jin ah kim. i was born in 1998, September, 17 Gwang ju, Korea with my sister. yes, i'm twins. sister is my best friend, and I have a one old brother. so my family consist of mom and dad brother, sister, eang mu the parrot, me. I think that my family is closed each other. my pet eang mu has yello feathers and cute face with red cheek
.
I live in Osan, Gyeonggi Province, korea. I stay in domitory during the semesters because my university that I go is in gwang ju which far away from osan. and I stay grand mather's house on every weekend in semesters, but now I stay in my home because corona virus is getting serious so vacation becomes longer.
.
i'm senior in university. my major is Early Childhood Education.
So I study child welfare, early childhood education, philosophy of education, special education. I think education is something amazing. because education can change human beings into better.
.
I want to speak english well. because I think that a person who speak english well looks cool. so I want to be cool. actually, I don't study hard. and I don't like study very much. but I'm writing english because I want to speak english well. please help me
thank you for listening

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My name is Jin ah Kim. I was born on  September 17, 1998 in Gwang ju, Korea with my twin sister. Yes, I have a twin. My sister is my best friend and I have one old brother. So my family consists of my Mom, Dad, brother, twin sister, eang mu the parrot and me. I think that my family are closed to each other. My pet eang mu has yellow feathers and a cute face with a red cheek.

I live in Osan, Gyeonggi Province, Korea. I stay in a dormitory during the semesters because the university that I go to is in gwang ju which is far from Osan. I stay with my grand mother's house every weekend in semesters but now I stay in my home because the coronavirus is getting serious so vacation becomes longer.

I'm a senior in university. My major is Early Childhood Education. So I study child welfare, early childhood education, philosophy of education and special education. I think education is amazing because education can change human beings into better. I want to speak English well because I think that a person who speaks English looks cool, so I want to be cool. I don't study hard and I don't like to study very much but I'm writing English because I want to speak well in English. 

Please help me. Thank you for listening.


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