her condition was already bad but got worse thesedays.
she moved to a bigger hospital 2 month ago.
Almost every time my father went to see her, I was with him.
I could see he is trying to show up there as many as he can.
Because the doctor said she will not be able to stay long.
It hurts my feeling whenever I see my grandma lying on the bed and father stading by in the hospital.
And I feel like the time left not much.
[x] My grandma is going through dimentia
[/] My grandma is going through Dementia (Typo)
[/] her condition was already bad but got worse these days.
[Better/] Her condition was already bad but worsened lately (got worse these days is still correct but you can shorten it to this instead)
[x] she moved to a bigger hospital 2 month ago.
[/] She moved to a bigger hospital 2 months ago (plural)
Almost every time my father went to see her, I was with him.
no errors
I could see he is trying to show up there as many as he can.
[/] I could see he is trying to show up there as many times as he can (underlined is the correct usage of the phrase)
Because the doctor said she will not be able to stay long.
no errors here
[x] It hurts my feeling whenever I see my grandma lying on the bed and father stading by in the hospital.
[/] Standing (typo)
And I feel like the time left not much.
[/] And I feel like the time left is not much (missing verb here)
