Frstly we have our freedom to vote or not. For example, in democratic societies we can both vote for a candidate or go outside and play.
Secondly, if the voting is mandatory, then people will not vote without deep thinking. For example, if I don't have a candidate that I want to vote, I will just choose anyone because the Voting is mandatory
Lastly, some people say that there should be mandatory voting because the vote rates are declining, but that's not a good solution. If the rate declines, government should do something to make people vote not making vote mandatory which restricts our freedom.
I think voting shouldn't be mandatory here's why.
Frstly we have our freedom to vote or not. For example, in democratic societies we can both vote for a candidate or go outside and play.
Secondly, if the voting is mandatory, then people will not vote without deep thinking. For example, if I don't have a candidate that I want to vote, I will just choose anyone because the Voting is mandatory
Lastly, some people say that there should be mandatory voting because the vote rates are declining, but that's not a good solution. If the rate declines, government should do something to make people vote not making vote mandatory which restricts our freedom.
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Corrected Version: I think voting shouldn’t be mandatory. Here’s why. Firstly, we should have the freedom to choose whether to vote or not. For example, in democratic societies, people can decide to vote for a candidate or simply spend their time doing something else. Secondly, if voting becomes mandatory, some people might vote without thinking deeply. For example, if I don’t have a candidate I truly support, I might just choose anyone because voting is required. Lastly, some people argue that voting should be mandatory because voter turnout is declining, but that’s not a good solution. If the voting rate is going down, the government should find ways to encourage people to vote, not force them, because that restricts our freedom. Short Explanation of Mistakes: Spelling/Capitalization: “Frstly” → “Firstly”; “Voting” should not be capitalized mid-sentence. Grammar: “we have our freedom to vote or not” → “we should have the freedom to choose whether to vote or not.” Clarity: Some sentences were unclear or repetitive; simplified for smoother flow. Logic: Improved examples and transitions for stronger reasoning and coherence.
