My English tutor wouldn't know that our English class was 20 minutes longer since today. I should have told her about it, but I couldn't because I needed to check. I also couldn't say it in English.
Yesterday, I went to fencing. It was sweltering hot, so I was sweating a lot. Today I decided to stay cool at home with my air conditioner and fans.
My English tutor wouldn't know that our English class was 20 minutes longer since today. I should have told her about it, but I couldn't because I needed to check. I also couldn't say it in English.
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Here are the corrections:
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Original: Yesterday, I went to fencing.
Corrected: Yesterday, I went to my fencing class.
Explanation: “Fencing” is an activity, but it's clearer and more natural to say "fencing class" when referring to a session or lesson. -
Original: It was sweltering hot, so I was sweating a lot.
Corrected: ✅ (No change needed)
Explanation: This sentence is grammatically correct and clearly conveys the idea. -
Original: Today I decided to stay cool at home with my air conditioner and fans.
Corrected: ✅ (No change needed)
Explanation: This sentence is also correct and clear. -
Original: My English tutor wouldn't know that our English class was 20 minutes longer since today.
Corrected: My English tutor didn’t know that our English class was 20 minutes longer starting today.
Explanation: “Wouldn’t know” is awkward here—use past tense “didn’t know.” Also, “since today” should be “starting today” for natural phrasing. -
Original: I should have told her about it, but I couldn't because I needed to check.
Corrected: ✅ (No change needed)
Explanation: This sentence is mostly fine, though you could also say “I wasn’t sure” for smoother wording. -
Original: I also couldn't say it in English.
Corrected: ✅ (No change needed)
Explanation: This sentence is simple and correct.
Final Edited Version
Yesterday, I went to my fencing class. It was sweltering hot, so I was sweating a lot. Today, I decided to stay cool at home with my air conditioner and fans.
My English tutor didn’t know that our English class was 20 minutes longer starting today. I should have told her about it, but I couldn't because I needed to check. I also couldn't say it in English.
