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Today, I played soccer I thought today was not the day today, but it was THE DAY. First, we played fun game sir was the goalkeeper and we have to score it it was 1-1 but ,I scored so, I won. next we did 2v1 I was two another person was next grade of the soccer we played and he said, your good and I was happy and again we won 3-2 . next we did 4v2 and I was two and there was sir in the other team. it was very hard but, sir only used 30% so it was easy and hard. and my friend and me, it was the best? teamwork I think but, yes so we won by 12-7 he was happy and so am I.

Today, I played soccer I thought today was not the day today, but it was THE DAY. First, we played fun game sir was the goalkeeper and we have to score it it was 1-1 but ,I scored so, I won. next we did 2v1 I was two another person was next grade of the soccer we played and he said, your good and I was happy and again we won 3-2 . next we did 4v2 and I was two and there was sir in the other team. it was very hard but, sir only used 30% so it was easy and hard. and my friend and me, it was the best? teamwork I think but, yes so we won by 12-7 he was happy and so am I.


 

Today Was the Day!

Today, I played soccer. At first, I thought it wasn’t going to be the day—but it turned out to be THE DAY!

First, we played a fun game. Sir was the goalkeeper, and we had to score against him. The score was 1–1, but I scored—so I won!

Next, we played 2v1. I was on the team of two, and the other player was from the grade above. After the game, he said, “You’re good,” and I was really happy. We won that match 3–2.

Then we played 4v2. I was again on the team of two, and Sir joined the other team. It was very hard, but Sir said he only used 30% of his power—so it felt both easy and hard!

Finally, my friend and I played together, and I think it was the best teamwork ever. We won 12–7. He was happy—and so was I!


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