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I want to learn and experience more things
I think that I am addicted to those three hobbies
If you do not have any hobbies now, why don't you find one now?
I guarantee you that hobbies will make your life more energetic and meaningful.

Thank you for listening.

I want to learn and experience more things.
I think that I am addicted to those three hobbies.
If you do not have any hobbies now, why don't you find one?
I guarantee you that hobbies will make your life more energetic and meaningful.

Thank you for listening.