I lose my wallet

I lose my wallet today.
The place where I lost my wallet is claw machine shop.
At time, my feelings is sad and unhappy.
But! I find my wallet. The find wallet place is claw machine shop's lost and found box.
I'm think ' haa.. it's so lucky!

I lose my wallet today. = I lost my wallet today. 
The place where I lost my wallet is claw machine shop. = The place where I lost my wallet is  a claw machine shop. 
At time, my feelings is sad and unhappy. But! I find my wallet. = At the time, I was sad and unhappy, but I found my wallet. 

The find wallet place is claw machine shop's lost and found box. = I found it in the claw machine shop's Lost and Found box. 
I'm think ' haa.. it's so lucky! = I thought, "I'm so lucky!" 

 

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Hi Ella!

You must have been upset when you lost your wallet. It's a good thing you found it! :) 

There are improvements in your sentence-making skills, but a few corrections were needed so please check them out. 

See you in our next class! :) 

-teacher Mischa :)