I play with my friend

I played with my friend today. We go to libary and mart.
We buy couple bangle. Couple bangle's color is rainbow.
And we go to libary. I reading book and my friend doing homework.
I like my freind and couple bangle!

I played with my friend today. ✅

We go to libary and mart. = We went to the libary and mart.
We buy couple bangle. = We bought friendship bangles. 

Couple bangle's color is rainbow. = The bangles are rainbow -colored. 
And we go to libary. = Then, we went to the library. 

I reading book and my friend doing homework. = I read a book, while my friend did her homework. 
I like my freind and couple bangle! = I like my friend and our friendship bangle. 

 

 

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Hi Ella! 

Good effort in writing! Just don't forget to use the PAST tense when writing about past events. 

It was fun reading about how you and your friend spent time together.

See you in class! 

teacher Mischa :)