My son is sensitive someside.When He didn't correct anwser, didn't do something He's expected.It's my genetic. Some elder said he is only kid. I used to often tantrum and cry at mom. I got scolding from mom and I got a pushment. Getting older I turned sensitive to good side. I still I didn't solve a problem and I didn't flow task I haven't expect, I used to get annoyed.I think give a hard time myself.When I see my son look like my childhood. I always tell him you are nice boy. clam down.
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Here are the corrections:
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Original: My son is sensitive someside.
Corrected: My son is sensitive in some ways.
Error: "Someside" is incorrect; "in some ways" is the correct phrase. -
Original: When He didn't correct anwser, didn't do something He's expected.
Corrected: When he didn’t get the correct answer or didn’t do something as expected.
Error: "He" should be lowercase unless it's the start of a sentence. "Didn't correct answer" should be "didn’t get the correct answer." "He's expected" is incorrect; it should be "as expected." -
Original: It's my genetic.
Corrected: It’s genetic.
Error: "My genetic" is incorrect; "genetic" is an adjective, so just "It’s genetic" is the correct phrasing. -
Original: Some elder said he is only kid.
Corrected: Some elders say he is an only child.
Error: "Some elder" should be "some elders" (plural). "Only kid" should be "only child" (common phrase). "Said" should be "say" for a general statement. -
Original: I used to often tantrum and cry at mom.
Corrected: I used to throw tantrums and cry to my mom often.
Error: "Tantrum" is a noun and should be "throw tantrums." "Cry at mom" should be "cry to my mom." "Often" is placed at the end for natural flow. -
Original: I got scolding from mom and I got a pushment.
Corrected: I got scolded by my mom and received punishment.
Error: "Got scolding" should be "got scolded." "Pushment" is incorrect; it should be "punishment." "From mom" should be "by my mom" for correct preposition use. -
Original: Getting older I turned sensitive to good side.
Corrected: As I got older, I became sensitive in a good way.
Error: "Getting older" should be "As I got older." "Turned sensitive" should be "became sensitive." "To good side" should be "in a good way." -
Original: I still I didn't solve a problem and I didn't flow task I haven't expect, I used to get annoyed.
Corrected: I still get annoyed when I can’t solve a problem or when things don’t go as expected.
Error: "I still I didn’t" is redundant; "I still" is correct. "Didn't solve" should match tense with "get annoyed." "Flow task" is unclear; "when things don’t go as expected" is more natural. -
Original: I think give a hard time myself.
Corrected: I think I am too hard on myself.
Error: "Give a hard time myself" is incorrect; "I am too hard on myself" is the correct phrase. -
Original: When I see my son look like my childhood.
Corrected: When I see my son, he reminds me of my childhood.
Error: "Look like my childhood" is incorrect; "he reminds me of my childhood" is a more natural expression. -
Original: I always tell him you are nice boy. clam down.
Corrected: I always tell him, "You are a nice boy. Calm down."
Error: "You are nice boy" should be "You are a nice boy." "Clam down" is a typo; it should be "Calm down." Direct speech should be in quotation marks.
Final Edited Text:
My son is sensitive in some ways. When he doesn’t get the correct answer or doesn’t do something as expected, he gets frustrated. I believe it’s genetic. Some elders say he is an only child, but I see myself in him.
I used to throw tantrums and cry to my mom often. I got scolded by my mom and received punishment. As I got older, I became sensitive in a good way. However, I still get annoyed when I can’t solve a problem or when things don’t go as expected. I think I am too hard on myself sometimes.
When I see my son, he reminds me of my childhood. I always tell him, "You are a nice boy. Calm down."
