I got a perm and got a clinc for hair. My son and husband went to play soccer and public bath house during I was staying at salon.From 5 years before when I whashed hair I used to my hair fallen out and hair has been doing get damaged. I needed to changed hairstlye and get a clinic. I had healing time alone comfortably. And I was relaxed. After afternoon we met then went to popular restraunt. I was refresh and comfortable days.
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HERE ARE THE CORRECTIONS:
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Original: I got a perm and got a clinc for hair.
Corrected: I got a perm and a hair treatment.
Explanation: The word "clinic" is not used in this context. "Hair treatment" is the correct term. -
Original: My son and husband went to play soccer and public bath house during I was staying at salon.
Corrected: My son and husband went to play soccer and to a public bathhouse while I was at the salon.
Explanation: "During" should be "while" to indicate the simultaneous actions. "Public bath house" should be "public bathhouse." The sentence structure was also revised for clarity. -
Original: From 5 years before when I whashed hair I used to my hair fallen out and hair has been doing get damaged.
Corrected: For the past five years, when I washed my hair, it used to fall out and become damaged.
Explanation: "From 5 years before" is corrected to "For the past five years." "Whashed" should be "washed." The phrase "I used to my hair fallen out" was incorrect; it should be "it used to fall out." The phrase "hair has been doing get damaged" was also incorrect; it should be "and become damaged." -
Original: I needed to changed hairstlye and get a clinic.
Corrected: I needed to change my hairstyle and get a treatment.
Explanation: "Needed to changed" should be "needed to change" (present tense for the infinitive verb). "Clinic" should be replaced with "treatment." -
Original: I had healing time alone comfortably.
Corrected: I had some relaxing time alone.
Explanation: "Healing time alone comfortably" was awkward; "relaxing time alone" is more natural. -
Original: And I was relaxed.
Corrected: I felt relaxed.
Explanation: "I was relaxed" can work, but "I felt relaxed" is more natural in this context. -
Original: After afternoon we met then went to popular restraunt.
Corrected: In the afternoon, we met and then went to a popular restaurant.
Explanation: "After afternoon" should be "In the afternoon." The word "restraunt" is misspelled; it should be "restaurant." The sentence structure was also slightly revised for clarity. -
Original: I was refresh and comfortable days.
Corrected: I felt refreshed and had a comfortable day.
Explanation: "Was refresh" should be "felt refreshed." "Comfortable days" should be "a comfortable day" to match the singular context.
Final Version:
I got a perm and a hair treatment. My son and husband went to play soccer and to a public bathhouse while I was at the salon. For the past five years, when I washed my hair, it used to fall out and become damaged. I needed to change my hairstyle and get a treatment. I had some relaxing time alone and felt refreshed. In the afternoon, we met and then went to a popular restaurant. It was a refreshing and comfortable day.
