A moment ago, the call was disconnected frequently. I think it happens sometimes because it's an international call. Every time that happens, I feel confused because I don't know what to do. I hope the call connection is better next time. (I am using a translator, etc. If you correct it, I will share it with my child.)
Original Sentence: A moment ago, the call was disconnected frequently.
Correction: A moment ago, the call was frequently disconnected.
Explanation: I've moved "frequently" to follow "was" to make the sentence flow more naturally.
Original Sentence: I think it happens sometimes because it's an international call.
Correction: I think this sometimes happens because it’s an international call.
Explanation: I've changed "it happens sometimes" to "this sometimes happens" for better clarity and conciseness.
Original Sentence: Every time that happens, I feel confused because I don't know what to do.
Correction: Whenever that happens, I feel confused because I don’t know what to do.
Explanation: I've replaced "Every time that happens" with "Whenever that happens" to avoid repetition and make the sentence more fluid.
Original Sentence: I hope the call connection is better next time.
Correction: I hope the call connection improves next time.
Explanation: I've changed "is better" to "improves" for a more precise and formal tone.
Original Sentence: (I am using a translator, etc. If you correct it, I will share it with my child.)
Correction: (I am using a translator. If you correct it, I will share it with my child.)
Explanation: I've removed "etc." as it is unnecessary in this context.
Final Corrected Version:
A moment ago, the call was frequently disconnected. I think this sometimes happens because it’s an international call. Whenever that happens, I feel confused because I don’t know what to do. I hope the call connection improves next time. (I am using a translator. If you correct it, I will share it with my child.)
