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Everyone dies at the end. So do I.

It was few hours ago. I was studying in the library. Suddenly someone touched my back and called my name. It was dad. He said grandfather is about to past away soon. I immediately packed up my stuffs then went back home with my dad. Parents asked me staying with my sick grandfather for a day. I accpeted it. I am with him in the emergency room now. He has broken his leg about a year ago. He got operations several times, but they were no use. Doctor said he won't be able to walk anymore. He's body can't cure itself. It is breaking down. I heard he suddenly had a stroke and was brought to the emergency room. I am hearing his painful breathing beside of him.
Looking at my grandfather, I thought 'everyone die in the end. so do I.' inevitably. I already consumed 25% of my life. I shouldn't be idle anymore! I can't waste a second.
Coffee makes me sick. I'll close today's diary at this point. I hope my grand father doesn't undergo severe pain.

March 30th 2018 Fri.

2:15am

It was few hours ago. I was studying in the library and suddenly someone touched my back and called my name. It was my dad. He said my grandfather is about to past away soon so I immediately packed up my stuffs then went back home with my dad. My parents asked me staying to stay with my sick grandfather for a day. I accpeted  accepted it. I am with him in the emergency room now. He has broken his leg about a year ago. He got operations several times, but they were no use. The doctor said he won't be able to walk anymore. He's body can't cure itself. It is breaking down. I heard he suddenly had a stroke and was brought to the emergency room. I am hearing his painful breathing beside of him while I’m beside him./ beside me. 
Looking at my grandfather, I thought made me think everyone die in the end so do I am

I inevitably? I already consumed 25% of my life. I shouldn't be idle anymore! I can't waste a second.
Coffee makes me sick. I'll close today's diary at this point. I hope my grand father doesn't undergo severe pain.

March 30th 2018 Fri.

2:15am

I’m sad upon reading your diary Terry. I could remember my grandmother, because I took care of her for long time before she died. And, It was so painful to me seeing her suffer. Cheer up and just think If ever your grandfather will pass away soon, atleast he won’t feel any pain anymore. Talk to you tomorrow in the class. :)


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