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YES, Yeon is my relatives of the same age.
she always says "I can't go abroad (to live)without my mother"
I understand because her mother brought up two children all by herself (she is a single mom)
When Yeon was looking for a house after marriage, She wanted to live near her mother's house to take care of her mother.

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I am lucky person because I live with my parents. I like it!
I can spend a lot of time with them and save money as well.

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Of course! I rellay love my parents. I don't want to regret not being a good daughter to my parents.
The family and filial piety are the basis for Korean.

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I try to calm down and to solve the situation.
I use all of the information what I know.

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I had a date with a man before. It was a first date.
Suddenly, I wanted to go to the bathroom.(poop)
It was an emergency. It was so loud! After a while, I was at peace.
When I left the toilet, there was the man in front of the room where I stayed.
Because The restroom had one toilet for women and one for men using a shared sink.
It was clear he had heard the sound....
I pretended nothing happens.
This was the most awkward moment of my life.

YES, Yeon is my relatives of the same age.
she always says "I can't go abroad (to live)without my mother"
I understand because her mother brought up two children all by herself (she is a single mom)
When Yeon was looking for a house after marriage, She wanted to live near her mother's house to take care of her (mother).

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I am a lucky person because I live with my parents. I like it!
I can spend a lot of time with them and save more money as well.

------------
Of course! I really love my parents. I don't want to regret not being a good daughter to my parents.
The family and filial piety are the basis for Korean.

-------------

I try to calm down and to solve the situation.
I use all of the information (what) I know.

--------------
I had a date with a man before. It was a first date.
Suddenly, I wanted to go to the bathroom.(poop)
It was an emergency. It was so loud! After a while, I was at peace.
When I left the toilet, there was the man in front of the restroom where I stayed.
(Because) The restroom has only one toilet for both women and men (using a shared sink.)
It was clear he had heard the sound and I pretended nothing happened.
This was the most awkward moment of my life.


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