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My brother's weight

2023.05.10

요청내용

My brother's Weight is 4.1kg
When he was born, his Weight was 3.8kg
yeah he gained weight, clap clap clap
I am happy because he is in a good health

첨삭내용

My brother's Weight is 4.1kg
When he was born, his Weight was 3.8kg
yeah he gained weight, clap clap clap
I am happy because he is in a good health

Corrections:

My brother's weight is 4.1 kg.

When he was born, his weight was 3.8 kg.

Yes, he gained weight.

I am happy because he is in good health.

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필리핀 전화영어 주 5회 10분 12주

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Speak Now 1 (Junior Course)

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