Hike

I wake early because my dad and I want to go hiking.
So I ate cereal.
After then we went out for hiking.
The hiking is so hard. But I went to top.
So I proud of me.
I want to hiking more.

I woke up early because my dad and I wanted to go hiking. I ate cereal, and then we went out for our hike. The hike was very hard, but I made it to the top. I am proud of myself. I want to go hiking more often.

 

This sounds great, David! To help you hike better, make sure to stretch and warm-up your body first so yon won't accidentally pull a muscle or be strained when hiking. Have fun and take care always! Let's continue to improve English speaking, writing, and understanding. - Teacher Rainbow ^_^