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These days I think a lot about living in Canada. There are many videos that I could watch in youtube channel and those videos advised me of the life in Canada. What is the most important thing that I need to live in Canada sucessfully? Definitely, language. Since I knew that we would receive the permanent resident card soon, language is the only problem I had. We save enough money to live in Canada for several years without profits. But I will have to find a job to support my family as soon as possible. Job interview is the necessary course for getting a job. I am not ready for it. It is different from casual talks that I usually have. There are many stories in youtube how people could get their jobs in Canada. I will probably have to study af first after I will move to Canada. Because of the language barriar, many Koreans have to work in manual jobs. I don't think my English ability can be dramatically improved this year, but I would do my best. Getting a good score in IELTS can be one of those efforts. Having a regular English conversation is one of those. I shouldn't think that my English will be improved a lot in Canada and postpone praticing English.

These days I think a lot about living in Canada. There are many videos that I could watch in youtube channel and those videos advised me of the life in Canada. What is the most important thing that I need to live in Canada sucessfully? Definitely, language. Since I knew that we would receive the permanent resident card soon, language is the only problem I had. We save enough money to live in Canada for several years without profits. But I will have to find a job to support my family as soon as possible. Job interview is the necessary course for getting a job. I am not ready for it. It is different from casual talks that I usually have. There are many stories in youtube how people could get their jobs in Canada. I will probably have to study af first after I will move to Canada. Because of the language barriar, many Koreans have to work in manual jobs. I don't think my English ability can be dramatically improved this year, but I would do my best. Getting a good score in IELTS can be one of those efforts. Having a regular English conversation is one of those. I shouldn't think that my English will be improved a lot in Canada and postpone praticing English.

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These days I think a lot about living in Canada. There are many videos that I could watch in YouTube channel and those videos advised and showed me of the life in Canada. What is the most important thing that I need to live in Canada successfully? It is definitely the language. Since, I knew that we would receive the permanent resident card soon; language is the only problem I had. We save enough money to live in Canada for several years without profits. But I will have to find a job to support my family as soon as possible. Job interview is the necessary course to for getting a job. I am not ready for it. It is different from casual talks that I usually have. There are many stories in YouTube how people could get their jobs in Canada. I will probably have to study af first after (before) I will move to Canada. Because of the language barrier, many Koreans have to work in manual labor jobs. I don't think my English ability can be dramatically improved this year, but I would do my best. Getting a good score in IELTS can be one of those efforts. Having a regular English conversation is one of those. I shouldn't think that my English will be improved a lot in Canada and postpone practicing English.


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