Thank you
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If I become a new employee for your company,
First of all, I will develop skills of engineering that I can expertly do.
and work successfully many services in my duty
Particularly, I will contribute a high level of satisfaction to an honor or ordering organization by carefully reviewing our products with my precision.
And I will manage time efficiently, I will try to practice learn other language such as English and Chinese.
I will prepare the situation of being on a business trip overseas at all times.
After the promotion, I will inspire our team members with cooperation with a strong sense of responsibility and expertise.
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Thank you
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If I will be (come) a new employee (for) in your company,
first of all, I will develop (skills of) my engineering skills (that I can expertly do) to the best that I can.
And I will (work) successfully do many services in my duty.
Particularly, I will contribute a high level of satisfaction to an honor or ordering organization by carefully reviewing our products with my precision.
(And) I will manage my time efficiently. I will try to practice (learn) my knowledge in using other language such as English and Chinese. I will prepare (the) for situations (of) like being on a business trip overseas at all times.
After the promotion, I will inspire our team members with cooperation with a strong sense of responsibility and expertise.
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