My country is Korea.. Our capital city is Seoul. There are good sites such as different schools, and librarys. There is also a popular restaurant called the Qoo Qoo. That is also my favorite restaurant, too. It's in a large building. That restaurant treats, too. Last of all, there are many famous people here. Most of my classmates know who the singers BTS, the soccer player Heug-min son and interviewer Jeasuck. They are all really famous. Our country is amazing. If you have time, come to Korea!
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My country is Korea.. Our capital city is Seoul.
[ My country is South Korea. Our capital city is Seoul.]
There are good sites such as different schools, and librarys.
[There are good buildings such as different schools and libraries.]
There is also a popular restaurant called the Qoo Qoo. [Correct]
That is also my favorite restaurant, too. It's in a large building. [Correct]
That restaurant treats, too.
[That restaurant has treats, too.]
Last of all, there are many famous people here. [Correct]
Most of my classmates know who the singers BTS, the soccer player Heug-min son and interviewer Jeasuck.
[Most of my classmates know BTS, the soccer player Son Heung-min and emcee/host Jae-suk.]
They are all really famous. Our country is amazing. If you have time, come to Korea! [Correct]
