apples,maple syrup, and pumpkins.and I like them. There are fun ways to enjoy the fall,too. Like jumping on leaves,and playing the game of yut. Lastly,in the fall there are amazing holidays. My favorites are chuseok,and
Halloween. I like them because I get to dress up on fancy clothes. I hope next year's fall will come soon!
My favorite season is fall . I like the cool weather and falling leaves. Sometimes, for a snack , I eat
apples,maple syrup, and pumpkins.and I like them. There are fun ways to enjoy the fall,too. Like jumping on leaves,and playing the game of yut. Lastly,in the fall there are amazing holidays. My favorites are chuseok,and
Halloween. I like them because I get to dress up on fancy clothes. I hope next year's fall will come soon!
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My favorite season is fall. [Correct Sentence]
I like the cool weather and falling leaves. [Correct Sentence]
Sometimes, for a snack , I eat apples,maple syrup, and pumpkins.and I like them.
[Sometimes, I have apples, pumpkins and maple syrup for a snack. I really like them.]
There are fun ways to enjoy the fall,too. Like jumping on leaves,and playing the game of yut.
[There are fun ways to enjoy the fall such as jumping on leaves and playing a game of 'yut'.]
Lastly,in the fall there are amazing holidays. My favorites are chuseok,and Halloween.
[Lastly, there are amazing holidays in the fall. My favorite holidays are Chuseok and Halloween.]
I like them because I get to dress up on fancy clothes.
[I like them because I get to dress up with fancy clothes.]
I hope next year's fall will come soon! [Correct Sentence]
