I have a friend named Henry from Taiwan. I met him at the U.S. in 2018. I went to summer camp sand I met him. I always played with him so we became best friend. He invited me to his birthday party so I went there. 5 years later he visited Korea Seoul at 2023 June. And he visited Korea seoul again{because,in Taiwan they have a feild day every October with people live in Taiwan and they will do feild day in his school this year so he got a vacation fo a week. (Octover 20th)}.
영작교정
완료
Taiwan friend
2023.10.23
I have a friend named Henry from Taiwan. I met him at the U.S. in 2018. I went to summer camp sand I met him. I always played with him so we became best friend. He invited me to his birthday party so I went there. 5 years later he visited Korea Seoul at 2023 June. And he visited Korea seoul again{because,in Taiwan they have a feild day every October with people live in Taiwan and they will do feild day in his school this year so he got a vacation fo a week. (Octover 20th)}.
튜터
Nang
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
276
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
Diary
-
2015.07.10
275
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
Day 4
-
2015.07.09
274
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Thank you for your correction in advance :)
-
2015.07.08
273
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
new boss
-
2015.07.07
272
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
Day 3
-
2015.07.07
271
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Please, Check my writing.
-
2015.07.06
270
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
1
Charm
2015.07.03
269
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
the workshop 2
-
2015.07.02
268
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
the workshop
-
2015.07.02
267
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
thankt you so much.
-
2015.07.02
266
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
A prophet
-
2015.07.02
265
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
20150701
-
2015.07.01
264
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
The right to be forgotten
-
2015.07.01
263
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Gay marrige
-
2015.06.30
262
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
question
-
2015.06.30
261
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭]
Thinking
-
2015.06.30
260
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Day 2
-
2015.06.29
259
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Day 1
-
2015.06.26
258
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
20150625-2
-
2015.06.26
257
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
20150625-1
-
2015.06.26