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could you check out my first note:)?
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I'm thinking about going to english academy in philiphines next year.
because I think there is nothing like using language everytime. but I feel like I'm going to get promoted next year... I worried if it is better not to go

Could you check out my first note:)?
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I'm thinking about going to an English academy in the Philiphines next year.
Because I think there is nothing like using the language everytime. But I feel like I'm going to get promoted next year... I worried if it is better not to go.

 

Note: Good day, Miss Soyang. I corrected your composition. You did well on this one. However, you have to learn how and when to capitalized the first letter of a word. Please remember that if you're using a proper noun, you have to capitalized the first letter of the word, like the Philippines. You can observe in my correction how and when to use it. The blue ones are the words that I added, while the green ones are the ones I corrected.