First I saw tigers, flamingos, penguins, giraffes and rinos.
Some of animal are saw in safari.
I was little bit sad in safari.
Because zookeeper want to show to people giraffee close.
Zookeeper called for the giraffe while feeding it, but it did not come.
Then we went to ride, I rode lilly dance, racing coster and so on.
I rode racing coster 3 time. It was so fast ride. I recommend that.
Yesterday, I went to Everland(amusement park) with my family.
First, I saw tigers, flamingos, penguins, giraffes, and rhinos.
Some of the animal are saw seen in Safari.
I was a little bit sad in Safari.
Because the zookeeper wants to show to people giraffes close.
The zookeeper called for the giraffe while feeding it, but it did not come.
Then we went for a ride. I rode Lilly Dance, racing coster, and so on.
I rode racing coster three times. It was so a very fast ride. I recommend that.
Note: Good day, Jian. I corrected your composition. You did well on this one. However, you have to learn how and when to use a comma. You can observe in my correction how and when to use it. The blue ones are the words that I added, while the green ones are the ones I corrected.
