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Q) Please, Describe your property search patterns.
S: Most likely I prefer to search for place to stay depending on price.
K : At first, I click the “Residential” button on the home screen. And then, If I know condo name, I search property by condo name. If I don’t know it, I search property by MRT name. When I search, I set search filters such as distance, number of rooms, price range, etc. Next, I sort lists again by ‘date’ or ‘price’ on the search result screen. I don’t trust sorting by recommendation. I usually sort by ‘date: new to old’ because if the property that is updated over 2 weeks before, I think it means it’s useless property. On the property detail screen, I usually tap photo and view photo by fullscreen. I sometimes tap “tap for amenities” button but not usual. I prefer agent’s descriptions more and I don’t trust amenities information. because it seems that there are advertising information a lot. I sometimes check ‘similar property’ area.

Q) Why do you preferred search by the property name, MRT name and search conditions more than by the map?
K : When I search location where I don’t know well or HDB, I search by map. But in case of the condo, I don’t search by map. Because there are not many condo in the area that I search and I feel it’s not accurate sometimes. I cannot find the condo that I saw in list view in map view.

Q) Please, Describe your property search patterns. 
S: Most likely I prefer to search for place to stay depending on price. 
K : At first, I click the “Residential” button on the home screen. Then, If I know the condo name, I search property by condo name. If I don’t know it, I search property by MRT name. When I search, I set search filters such as distance, number of rooms, price range, etc. Next, I sort lists again by ‘date’ or ‘price’ on the search result screen. I don’t trust sorting by recommendation. I usually sort by ‘date: new to old’ because if the property that is updated over 2 weeks before, I think it means it’s useless property. On the property detail screen, I usually tap photo and view photo by full screen. I sometimes tap “tap for amenities” button but not usual. I prefer agent’s descriptions more and I don’t trust amenities information because it seems that there are a lot of advertisings. I sometimes check ‘similar property’ area. 

Q) Why do you prefer to search by the property name, MRT name and search conditions more than by the map?
K : When I search location where I don’t know well or HDB, I search by map. But in case of the condo, I don’t search by map. Because there are not many condos in the area that I search and I feel it’s not accurate sometimes. I cannot find the condo that I saw in list view in map view.


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