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Hello, My english name is hyang! (haha)
I understand you because you meet a lot of students. It was a shame that I couldn't express my gladness much because Speaking english was difficult. I sometimes thought you. You are a good english teacher to me.

Unfortunately, I failed but i’m okay. I had a good rest for two months. It's common in Korea. I can go back to school now, but I want to go back after I pass exam. My college helps students graduate from college while working.
Have a good day!

Hello, My english name is hyang! (haha)
I understand you because you meet a lot of students. It was a shame that I couldn't express my gladness much because Speaking english was difficult. I sometimes thought you. You are a good english teacher to me.

Unfortunately, I failed but i’m okay. I had a good rest for two months. It's common in Korea. I can go back to school now, but I want to go back after I pass exam. My college helps students graduate from college while working.
Have a good day!

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Corrected Message:

Hello, my English name is Hyang! (Haha)
I understand you because you meet a lot of students. I’m a little sad that I couldn’t express my happiness well because speaking English is difficult. Sometimes I thought about you. You are a very good English teacher to me.

Unfortunately, I failed, but I’m okay. I had a good rest for two months, which is common in Korea. I can go back to school now, but I want to return after I pass my exam. My college helps students graduate while working.

Have a good day!

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Reply:

Hi Hyang! Thank you for sharing your thoughts so honestly. Don’t worry about your exam;  it’s okay to take your time and rest when you need it. I’m proud of you for keeping a positive attitude and thinking ahead about your studies. Keep believing in yourself, and remember that every effort you make brings you closer to your goals. You’re doing great, and I know you’ll succeed. Keep going!

 

 


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