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2023.08.10

요청내용

I made simple computer game for entry.
It was hard but making was fun.
I played it and it was funny.
I think I made game well.
I will play this game with my family.

첨삭내용

I made a simple computer game for entry.
It was hard, but making it was fun.
I played it, and it was funny.
I think I played the game well.
I will play this game with my family.

수강정보

필리핀 화상영어 주 3회 30분 24주

교재

New Children's Talk 1

[주니어] 프리토킹

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제목

작성자

튜터

작성일

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