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1.Before I draw a proper object, one thing I need to do is to draw crating accurately.
2.We tried to maximize a volume with a piece of A4 paper with constraints and we ended up making it compressed in each side.
3.To avoid academic integrity, we had to find every single overlap of our assignments.
4.A person who was mis-sentenced by a judge needed to pay a lot of retainer.
5.You need to follow the structural manuals to construct a high building safely.


1. The meteorology agency’s accuracy about weather has been decreasing.
2. There were some people adjacent the place where I was standing.
3. The messy, awkward sentences were compressed into one simple sentence.
4. My thinks about you were overlapped because of the photos which we took together
5. Something bad smell seeped on my clothes


1. The group put fake bills in circulation.
2. Unemployment is having a corrosive effect on the world economy.
5. The owner promised to expedite the replacement of the refrigerator.
6. It is necessary to carry gadgets and implements as an IT professional.
9. Maintaining the weight is the most difficult thing in a diet.

1.Before I draw a proper object, one thing I need to do is to draw crating accurately.
2.We tried to maximize a volume with a piece of A4 paper with constraints and we ended up making it compressed in each side.
3.To avoid academic integrity, we had to find every single overlap of our assignments.
4.A person who was mis-sentenced by a judge needed to pay a lot of retainer.
5.You need to follow the structural manuals to construct a high building safely.


1. The meteorology agency’s accuracy about weather has been decreasing.
2. There were some people adjacent the place where I was standing.
3. The messy and awkward sentences were compressed into one simple sentence.
4. My thinks thoughts about you were overlapped because of the photos which we took together(.)
5. Something bad smell seeped on my clothes(.)


1. The group put fake bills in circulation.
2. Unemployment is having a corrosive effect on the world economy.
5. The owner promised to expedite the replacement of the refrigerator.
6. It is necessary to carry gadgets and implements as an IT professional.
9. Maintaining the weight is the most difficult thing in a diet.


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