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Today, I watched a newly released movie, Dunkirk. The setting of the story is Dunkirk, a French territory during the World War 2. I am not a person who enjoys war movies. However, this movie was very appealing in that it describes the desperate situation of the soldiers and the war itself, without showing too much blood and cruel scenes. Also, I loved the way that the director processed the story and the cast expressed the characters' feeling. Overall, it is a worth watching movie.
1.The air contamination by emission of CO2 accelerates global warming.
2.We got to dispose of all our household items by sale before our prolonged trip.
3.The government legislated to prevent air contamination from gas emission for the automobile by the emission charge.
4.We made this coat out of the fabric will not shrink in water.
5.Most of the young people want to have stable life but no challenges.
1.Military life is difficult for ordinary people and is followed by constraint.
2.I have bought a new T-shirt but it gets contamination soon.
3.For a long national war between two parties, a power of the country has been depleted.
4.After dust is being dispose of in water, the water is kept in a reservoir.
5.I thought my pants shrunk after washing but actually I got obese.
1.The rules that the company made was a big constraint to employees.
2.Contrary to expectations, the four-river refurbishment contaminated all rivers.
3.You have to know how to solve the problem elementally.
4.Building a reservoir helps preventing floods.
5.The table is not stable, we need a something to make stable the table.

Today, I watched a newly released movie, Dunkirk. The setting of the story is in a Dunkirk, a French territory during the World War 2. I am not a person who enjoys war movies. However, this movie was very appealing in a way that it describes the desperate situation of the soldiers and the war itself, without showing too much blood and cruel scenes. Also, I loved the way that the director processed the story and the cast expressed the characters' feeling. Overall, It is a worth watching movie.
1.The air contamination by emission of CO2 accelerates global warming.
2.We got have to dispose of all of our household items by sale selling It before our prolonged trip.
3.The government legislated to prevent air contamination from gas emission for the automobile by the emission charge.
4.We made this coat out of the fabric so It will not shrink in water.
5.Most of the young people want to have a stable life but with no challenges.
1.Military life is difficult for ordinary people and is It's followed by constraint.
2.I have bought a new T-shirt but It gets contamination soon.
3.For a long national war between two parties, a power of the country has been depleted.
4.After the dust is being dispose of in water. The water is kept in a reservoir.
5.I thought my pants shrunk after washing but actually I got obese.
1.The rules that the company made was a big constraint to employees.
2.Contrary to expectations, the four-river refurbishment contaminated all rivers.
3.You have to know how to solve the problem elementally.
4.Building a reservoir helps preventing floods.
5.The table is not stable, we need a something to make  it stable. stable the table. 


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