Tanghulu

2023.07.16

요청내용

Today we enjoyed my first Tanghulu completely.Actually we couldn't meet at all.As you know, that's because it was rain.We broke our promise because of a bad rainy season.But!luckily,it was cool!So,I was very good.First we went to Tanghulu store that we decided yesterday.Iwanted to go 왕가 Tanghulu but ,the line was too long so ,unfortunately,we went to 톡톡 Tanghulu.I and mybest friend 영우 ate blueberry Tanghulu but best friend 고은 didn't eat it because of dite.It tasted like just blueberry .

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Today we enjoyed my first Tanghulu completely couldn't meet at allAs you know, that's because it was We broke our promise because of a bad rainy



				
					
						
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