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Bella had learned a lesson

There was a girl who thought that she was the most pretty and popular. Her name was Bella. But only in her thinking she was pretty. Her real self was ugly and fat. So everyone just pretend to like her. And Bella kept telling her classmate that how much she was pretty and how much she was popular. One day, a boy named Ianhy. He was very famous boy. He was shown on TV and he had even on the newspaper. He was a star. And he was very handsome too. Bella thought that, that boy was her boyfriend. So B

There was a girl who thought that she was the most pretty and popular. Her name was Bella. But only in her thinking she was pretty. Her real self was ugly and fat. So everyone just pretend to like her. And Bella kept telling her classmate that how much she was pretty and how much she was popular. One day, a boy named Ianhy. He was very famous boy. He was shown on TV and he had even on the newspaper. He was a star. And he was very handsome too. Bella thought that, that boy was her boyfriend. So B

 

There was a girl who thought that she was the prettiest and the most popular. Her name was Bella. But only in her thinking she was pretty. Her real self was ugly and fat. So everyone just pretend to like her. And Bella kept telling her classmate that how much pretty she was and how much popular she was. One day, a boy named Ianhy. He was a very famous boy. He appears on TV and he was even on the newspaper. He was a star. He was very handsome too. Bella thought that, that boy was her boyfriend. So B

 


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