The athletic competition began, and the third grade participated in individual running, finding dragon balls, moving flags, and relaying events. I finished second in the individual race, but I was still satisfied.
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My friends and I didn't have a sports day for the first time until we were in third grade. I was so excited that I couldn't sleep. My heart was pounding when I arrived at Hanbat Gymnasium.
The athletic competition began, and the third grade participated in individual running, finding dragon balls, moving flags, and relaying events. I finished second in the individual race, but I was still satisfied.
(Please show us the awkward expressions and mistakes )
Correction:
My friends and I don't have any sports day for the first time until we were in third grade. I was so excited that I couldn't sleep that night. My heart was pounding when I arrived at Hanbat Gymnasium.
When the athletic competition began, the third grade participated in individual running finding dragon balls, moving flags, and relaying events. I finished second in the individual race but I was still satisfied.
That was so awesome! It was a blast!
