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23.03.23 My daughter

My daughter got a perm two weeks ago.It was the first time in her life. One day she told me. "Mom, I want to get a perm before my aunt's wedding. I want to look beautiful." So I told her it would take a long time. But she was stubborn. And contrary to my expectations, she endured about two hours. She was satisfied with her new hairstyle. On my sister's wedding day, my daughter was a flower girl, and she did well calmly without being nervous at all. These days, I'm realizing she's grown up a lot.

My daughter got a perm two weeks ago.It was the first time in her life. One day she told me. "Mom, I want to get a perm before my aunt's wedding. I want to look beautiful." So I told her it would take a long time. But she was stubborn. And contrary to my expectations, she endured about two hours. She was satisfied with her new hairstyle. On my sister's wedding day, my daughter was a flower girl, and she did well calmly without being nervous at all. These days, I'm realizing she's grown up a lot.

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My daughter got a perm two weeks ago. It was the first time she had it in her life.                                                                                                                                                                                                 One day she told me, "Mom, I want to get a perm before my aunt's wedding. I want to look beautiful." So I told her it would take a long time. But she was stubborn, so I gave in.                                           And contrary to my expectations, she endured about two hours of hair treatment. She was satisfied with her new hairstyle!                                                                                                                                 On my sister's wedding day, my daughter was a flower girl. She was calm and didn't get nervous at all!.                                                                                                                                                                   I'm starting to realize that she has been growing up a lot.


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