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The girl's soccer

2023.05.19

요청내용

TODAY, OUR CLASS HAS A GIRL'S SOCCER.
I ALSO GOT INVOLVED IN SOCCER.
I WAS REPLACING.
BUT IT WAS FUN.

첨삭내용

TODAY, OUR CLASS HAS A GIRL'S SOCCER.
I ALSO GOT INVOLVED IN SOCCER.
I WAS REPLACING.
BUT IT WAS FUN.

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TODAY, OUR CLASS HAS A GIRL'S SOCCER GAME.
I WAS FORCED TO JOIN THE SOCCER GAME.
I WAS REPLACING SOMEONE, BUT IT WAS FUN.

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필리핀 전화영어 주 3회 10분 4주

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