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Let me introduce my favorite professor from university. her name is qikang. shi is a chinese. she was my chinese class professor in my third year, and her ability to trach always impressed me. her ability of korean is very good and she is an outgoing person who enjoys new challenges. her class is always popular because she has a sense of humor. That's why I like her very much.
Let me introduce my neighbor, whose name is hyun-ju. I met her 9 month ago at the swimming class in our neighborhood. she speaks english very well because when she was a high school student, she studied english. she is an outgoing person who enjoys new challenges. she has a sense og humor. I like her because she is ambitious and dynamic person. she is good at swimming. she gave me feedback of swimming posture. That's why I like her very much.

I'm majoring in international management at hongik university. International management is a subject that I have wanted to study for a long time. when I was high school student, I was interested in chinese. after that, I had a chance to go to china for 1 year. It was exchange student program. so I went to china, in there I learned a lot. For example I learned chinese cultur and I made foreig friends. The biggest things is I decided international wedding. Through my major, I can learn the necessary knowledge of my major.

Let me introduce my favorite professor from university. her name is qikang. shi is a chinese. she was my chinese class professor in my third year, and her ability to trach always impressed me. her ability of korean is very good and she is an outgoing person who enjoys new challenges. her class is always popular because she has a sense of humor. That's why I like her very much.
Let me introduce my neighbor, whose name is hyun-ju. I met her 9 month ago at the swimming class in our neighborhood. she speaks english very well because when she was a high school student, she studied english. she is an outgoing person who enjoys new challenges. she has a sense og humor. I like her because she is ambitious and dynamic person. she is good at swimming. she gave me feedback of swimming posture. That's why I like her very much.

I'm majoring in international management at hongik university. International management is a subject that I have wanted to study for a long time. when I was high school student, I was interested in chinese. after that, I had a chance to go to china for 1 year. It was exchange student program. so I went to china, in there I learned a lot. For example I learned chinese cultur and I made foreig friends. The biggest things is I decided international wedding. Through my major, I can learn the necessary knowledge of my major.

 

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Let me introduce my favorite professor from my university her name is Qikang and she's Chinese. She was my professor in my third year in the university  and her ability impressed me. She can speak well in Korean language and she's very outgoing person who enjoys new challenges. Her class in the university was very popular because of her sense of humor, that's why I like her very much.

Let me introduce my neighbor her name is Hyun-ju. I met her 9 months ago at the swimming class in our neighborhood. She can speak English very well, because she studied English when she was a high school student. She's an outgoing person who enjoys new challenges. She also has a sense of humor like my teacher in the university. I like her because she's ambitious and a dynamic person. She's good at swimming and she gave me some feedback on the proper swimming posture. That's why I like her that much.

I'm majored in international management at Hongik university. International management is a subject that I want to study for a long time. When I was a high school student, I was interested in Chinese then after that I had a chance to go to China for 1 year. It was an exchange student program, so I went to China. In there I've learned a lot. For example I've learned Chinese culture and I had a foreign friends. The biggest decising I had is that I decided to have an international wedding. My major can give me necessary knowledge that I need.


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