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Very good friends.

I have best friends.
Min-jung and Jin-hee are very good friends.
We grew up together.
We went to same middle school and high school.
We were same club.
It was a choir.
We sang a song after school every day.

But now Min-jung can't meet anymore.
Because she lives in U.S.A.
She married 2 years ago.
She's husband lives in America.
When she married, she leaved Korea.
But we e-mail to each other.
We never forget our friendship.
She is during pregnancy.
She will be a mom after 2 month.

Jin-hee lives in Korea now.
We often meet together.
She wants a baby. And she is trying to be a mom with her husband. They will be a parents soon.
I pray for them. We like each other very much.
We were always good friends, and we still are.

I have two best friends.
Min-jung and Jin-hee are my very good friends.
We grew up together.
We went to same middle school and high school.
We were in the same club and It was a choir.
We sang a song after school every day.

But now Min-jung can't meet us anymore.
Because she lives in U.S.A.
She got married 2 years ago.
Her husband lives in America.
When she got married, she leaved Korea.
But we still emailed each other.
We never forget our friendship.
She's pregnant now and she'll ba a mother after 2 months.

Jin-hee lives in Korea now.
We often meet each other.
She wants to have a baby, and she's trying to be a mom with her husband.They will be a parents soon.
I praying for them. We like each other very much.
We were always be a good friends and best friends forever.


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