To day I went to school. I wanted to make some friends. So, I played with my friends. It was fun. I became friends with jisoo. She was kind and nice to me. I was happy to be her friend. We played with other girls too. we played tag and hide and seek. It was fun. Soon, I had many friends. I was happy.
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Today, I went to school. I wanted to be with my friends, so I played with them. It was fun. I became friend with Jisoo. Se was kind and nice to me. I was happy to be her friend. We played with some other girls too. We played tag and hide seek. It was fun. Soon, I knew a lot of them and became friends. I was very happy!
