What’s in the living Room?

hello. My name is ha-nuel kim, and I live in Jeju island in Korea
This is the living room in my house.
There is a TV,and there are plants.
We like the plants very much.

hello. My name is ha-nuel kim, and I live in Jeju island in Korea
This is the living room in my house.
There is a TV,and there are plants.
We like the plants very much.

Hello. My name is Ha-nuel kim, and I live on Jeju Island in Korea. This is the living room in my house. There is a TV, and there are plants. We like the plants very much.

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