Today, I made some cars, and guns with many tools. First, I made some guns. Making a gun is pretty straightforward. But, making moving a car is so difficult. I try to make cars perfect. But, failed many times. However, I finally make it almost perfect! Its power is great. And speed is... um... not bad. But its wheels are too slippery. That's why my car's power is not so good. So, I paste wheels made of rubber. Now, that car was perfect. I was happy to make that car.
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Science box.
2023.01.21
Today, I made some cars, and guns with many kinds of tools. First, I made some guns. Making gun is pretty easy. But, making moving car is so difficult. I try to make cars perfect. But, failed many times. However, I finally make it almost perfect! It's power is great. And speed is... um... not bad. But it's wheels are too slippery. That's why my car's power not so good. So, I paste wheels made by rubber. Now, that car was perfect. I was happy to made that car.
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