Today, I made some cars, and guns with many tools. First, I made some guns. Making a gun is pretty straightforward. But, making moving a car is so difficult. I try to make cars perfect. But, failed many times. However, I finally make it almost perfect! Its power is great. And speed is... um... not bad. But its wheels are too slippery. That's why my car's power is not so good. So, I paste wheels made of rubber. Now, that car was perfect. I was happy to make that car.
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Science box.
2023.01.21
Today, I made some cars, and guns with many kinds of tools. First, I made some guns. Making gun is pretty easy. But, making moving car is so difficult. I try to make cars perfect. But, failed many times. However, I finally make it almost perfect! It's power is great. And speed is... um... not bad. But it's wheels are too slippery. That's why my car's power not so good. So, I paste wheels made by rubber. Now, that car was perfect. I was happy to made that car.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 3회 30분 4주
교재
side by side 3 (Junior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
4539
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
My interest.
-
2023.05.12
4538
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
please, easy sentence for me
-
2023.05.12
4537
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Sorry teacher
-
2023.05.11
4536
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
studying math is better
Bowen
2023.05.11
4535
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
why we are studying science
Bowen
2023.05.11
4534
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
Introduction of Prof. Sever 2
-
2023.05.11
4533
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
Introduction of Prof. Sever 1
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2023.05.11
4532
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
About decomposers
-
2023.05.10
4531
완료
[112번째 영작 첨삭]
Writing in English
Gail
2023.05.10
4530
완료
[20번째 영작 첨삭]
Car
-
2023.05.10
4529
접수
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
테스트 입니다.
-
2023.05.10
4528
접수
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
테스트 입니다.
-
2023.05.10
4527
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
I couldn't go to exercise
Shine
2023.05.10
4526
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
테스트 입니다.
-
2023.05.10
4525
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
last weekend
Flei
2023.05.10
4524
완료
[18번째 영작 첨삭]
My brother's weight
Cha
2023.05.10
4523
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
Children's day
Camille
2023.05.09
4522
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
Hard workers
-
2023.05.08
4521
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭]
The Seoul Land group.
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2023.05.08
4520
완료
[111번째 영작 첨삭]
Fruits
Gail
2023.05.08