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Part-time Job For making a living

Hello Marj~
Are you having a great holiday?
I started new partime job today! My story is below.

[Part-time Job For making a living]
I quit my job 2 month ago. There was no financial plan for the moment.
I just had some money but it's quite insufficient to make a living.
So I found a part-time job. It's accessory making job.
Today was my first day.
I was there to wrap lots of earrings, hair pins.
It's kind of factory. My work is very simple labor.
There is no mental stress. I don't have to think about anything. That is great!
Even though I have a little pain in my wrist, waist after finishing my job, that is reasonable.
Next wednesday is my ending day. I promised to work by that day.
Today I'm going to bed early because of tomorrow. I'm worried about a crowded subway tomorrow morning.

Hello Marj~
Are you having a great holiday?
I started new partime job today! My story is below.

[Part-time Job For making a living]
I quit my job 2 months ago. I have no financial plan at the moment.
I just had some money but it's quite insufficient to make a living.
So I found a part-time job. It's like a factory of accessories making and today was my first day.
My job is very simple I just need to wrap lots of earrings and hair pins. 
There is no mental stress. I don't have to think about anything. Which is really great for me.
Even though I have a little pain in my wrist and waist after finishing my job, that is reasonable.
Next wednesday will be my last day. I promised to work by that day.
Today I'm going to bed early because it will be crowded in the subway station and I am worried about that.


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