Happy new year

I went to trip with my family to welcome new year. There was facility that people could experience police activity like shooting on screen board or simulating conditions on driving car or learning how to self - defend etc.. Since i became a police, i wanted my family to experience police activity so it was great chance for me and my family. Fortuneately, my father and mother and brother were all satisfied. We also went to hot spring and enjoyed the hot water.I hope all i want come true!

I went on a trip with my family to welcome the new year. There was a facility where people could experience police activity like shooting on a screen board or simulating conditions on driving a car or learning how to self-defend etc. Since I became a police officer, I wanted my family to experience police activity so it was a great chance for me and my family. Fortunately, my father, mother, and brother were all satisfied. We also went to a hot Spring and enjoyed the hot water. I hope all that I want will come true

Grammar reminders: Pronoun 'I' is always written in capital. Also, when we are making a list in a sentence, we only use and before the last item. Example:  Fortunately, my father, mother, and brother were all satisfied.

MESSAGE: Happy New Year, Yeonsik! May this year be a fruitful year for you and your family.