I went on a trip with my family to welcome the new year. There was a facility where people could experience police activity like shooting on a screen board or simulating conditions on driving a car or learning how to self-defend etc. Since I became a police officer, I wanted my family to experience police activity so it was a great chance for me and my family. Fortunately, my father, mother, and brother were all satisfied. We also went to a hot Spring and enjoyed the hot water. I hope all that I want will come true
Grammar reminders: Pronoun 'I' is always written in capital. Also, when we are making a list in a sentence, we only use and before the last item. Example: Fortunately, my father, mother, and brother were all satisfied.
MESSAGE: Happy New Year, Yeonsik! May this year be a fruitful year for you and your family.
