『Solin’s souvenir shop』Ep1-3

But, she was looking at a small piggy bank looking thing. There was a lot of piggy banks, and lots of other stuffs, but Diane couldn’t stop looking at that piggy bank. The piggy bank’s size was about half size of the adult’s hand. There was a short string at the piggy’s tail. Diane thought it was a key ring.
“Is this a key ring?”
Diane asked. Solin smiled, and nodded. Diane really wanted that key ring. It wasn’t because that it is a key ring, the piggy was super cute.

But, she was looking at a small piggy bank looking thing. There were a lot of piggy banks and lots of other stuffs, but Diane couldn’t stop looking at that particular piggy bank. The piggy bank’s size was about half size of the adult’s hand. There was a short string at the piggy’s tail. She thought it was a key ring.
“Is this a key ring?”
Diane asked. Solin smiled, and nodded. She really wanted that key ring. It wasn’t because it's a  key ring,  but it's because the piggy was super cute.

 

***learn how to use the contraction. 

For example: He is = he's , It is =it's

***You must remember the correct number of nouns 

in a sentence to make your sentences more beautiful.