Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued. So both function and love are needed. Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education. Both education has pros and cons. We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education where technology and qualifications are valued. However, society should not be scared, we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
영작교정
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English class presentation
2022.10.12
Not only visible technology but also invisible values should be valued.So both function and love are needed.Therefore, it is necessary to combine the function of modern education with the right to love and cherish classical education.Both education have pros and cons.We should create a new education by combining the advantages of the two education. Now a society where technology and qualifications are valued.However, Society should not be scored,we have human dignity and we are valuable people.
수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 2회 30분 12주
튜터
April
교재
side by side 1 (Senior course)
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
4679
완료
[117번째 영작 첨삭]
Mom2
Gail
2023.06.12
4678
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
HaHaHa!!!
-
2023.06.12
4677
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
What kind of do you want to
Jana
2023.06.12
4676
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
What kind of do you want to
Jana
2023.06.12
4675
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
Take a walk
Flei
2023.06.12
4674
완료
[20번째 영작 첨삭]
'Spooky' store
Yumi
2023.06.11
4673
완료
[21번째 영작 첨삭]
On Sunday
-
2023.06.11
4672
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
A track and field competition
Cashy
2023.06.11
4671
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
is this sentences correct?2
Joey
2023.06.10
4670
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
is this sentences correct?1
Joey
2023.06.10
4669
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
Technology is important!
Mayah
2023.06.10
4668
완료
[18번째 영작 첨삭]
Help community
-
2023.06.09
4667
완료
[26번째 영작 첨삭]
Girl's soccer
Mary Grace
2023.06.09
4666
완료
[25번째 영작 첨삭]
Swimming pool
Mary Grace
2023.06.09
4665
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Use the present tense.
Kimmy
2023.06.09
4664
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭]
played with my friends
-
2023.06.09
4663
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
English class after school
-
2023.06.09
4662
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
go to test
-
2023.06.09
4661
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
my family
Rhiad
2023.06.08
4660
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
Hmm...
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2023.06.08