and there is a English job interview on Thursday.
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I am Maria, who applied the KOHI Global cooperation center.
As an Intern in KOHI, I could understand about Global cooperation business.
I helped 6 ODA educations and International Forum from start stage to Finish.
so I raised the professionality.
Also, I processed the center's whole business spending with THEZONE I-cube ERP system, so I can use the center's spending to suit the KOHI's budget .
I would like to work hard for Health and welfare person's fostering, and I will offer the best education services for foreigners and Koreans.
Thank you.
Professor A always listen carefully the entire department person's opinion. and she helped me to enhance my ability with searching the Data, Operating education, planning meeting and so on.
B is best. She is considerable and she assigns the work clearly. I learned a lot from her.
C Researcher make department vigorous. She is counseling us.
D researcher is smart and kind. I want to work with her again.
After finishing the Intern's contract, I knew the work how meaningful and Interesting to me. I would like to work for developing countries and Korea’s Health education, so that I introduce the KOHI to the world.
I applied for a job, corporate 'KOHI'.
and there is a English job interview on Thursday.
I prepared the sentences, please check it and fix it more stylish.
Thank you Venice.
Hello
I am Maria, who applied the KOHI Global cooperation center.
As an Intern in KOHI, I could understand about Global cooperation business.
I helped 6 ODA educations and International Forum from start stage to Finish.
so I raised the professionality.
Also, I processed the center's whole business spending with THEZONE I-cube ERP system, so I can use the center's spending to suit the KOHI's budget .
I would like to work hard for Health and welfare person's fostering, and I will offer the best education services for foreigners and Koreans.
Thank you.
Professor A always listen carefully the entire department person's opinion. and she helped me to enhance my ability with searching the Data, Operating education, planning meeting and so on.
B is best. She is considerable and she assigns the work clearly. I learned a lot from her.
C Researcher make department vigorous. She is counseling us.
D researcher is smart and kind. I want to work with her again.
After finishing the Intern's contract, I knew the work how meaningful and Interesting to me. I would like to work for developing countries and Korea’s Health education, so that I introduce the KOHI to the world.
I applied for a job (corporate) in 'KOHI'.
and there (is) will be an English job interview on Thursday.
I prepared these sentences. Please check and fix them to be more stylish.
Thank you Venice.
Hello
I am Maria, who is applying at (the) KOHI Global cooperation center.
I worked as an intern in your company last April 2015. As an intern in KOHI, I (could understand) learned a lot about Global cooperation business.
I helped 6 ODA educations and International Forum from the starting stage to finish so I was raised (the) with professionality.
(Also,) I also processed the center's whole business spending with THEZONE I-cube ERP system, so I can use the center's spending to suit the KOHI's budget .
I would like to work hard for health and welfare person's fostering, and I will offer the best education services (for) to foreigners and Koreans.
Thank you.
Professor A always listen (carefully) to the entire’s department (person's) opinion carefully, and she helped me (to) enhance my abilities with (searching the) data searching, operating education, planning meeting and so on.
B is the best. She is considerate and she assigns the work clearly. I learned a lot from her.
(C) Researcher C (make) does the tasks in the department vigorously. She is counseling us.
Researcher D is smart and kind. I want to work with her again.
After finishing the Intern's contract, I knew (the work) how work is meaningful and Interesting (to me). I would like to work (for) to help develop the countries and Korea’s Health Education, so that I can introduce the KOHI to the world.
I applied for a job in 'KOHI'.
and there will be an English job interview on Thursday.
I prepared these sentences. Please check and fix them to be more stylish.
Thank you Venice.
Hello
I am Maria, who is applying at KOHI Global cooperation center.
I worked as an intern in your company last April 2015. As an intern in KOHI, I learned a lot about Global cooperation business.
I helped 6 ODA educations and International Forum from the starting stage to finish so I was raised with professionality. I also processed the center's whole business spending with THEZONE I-cube ERP system, so I can use the center's spending to suit the KOHI's budget .
I would like to work hard for health and welfare person's fostering, and I will offer the best education services to foreigners and Koreans.
Thank you.
Professor A always listen to the entire’s department opinion carefully, and she helped me enhance my abilities with data searching, operating education, planning meeting and so on.
B is the best. She is considerate and she assigns the work clearly. I learned a lot from her. Researcher C does the tasks in the department vigorously. She is counseling us.
Researcher D is smart and kind. I want to work with her again.
After finishing the Intern's contract, I knew how work is meaningful and Interesting. I would like to work to help develop the countries and Korea’s Health Education, so that I can introduce the KOHI to the world.
