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Hi Ven

Hi~ I came up something urgent so I delayed our English class.
I lost my card wallet. Many card was in there. I found it my card wallet wasn't in my shoulder bag.
But, it was very late time. So I went to the gym as soon as I wake up.
I didn't found my card wallet at fitting room and bathroom so I asked for gym's clerk if my wallet has been came up, please call me. ㅠㅠㅠ
And then I went to the gym again to look around fitting room when not have a lot of people in there.
Fortunely, I can able to find my wallet at other locker. Maybe someone might use a locker that I used and put down my wallet involuntarily. Anyway my happening was over. I scared the hell out of me. From now on, I need to get habit of looking aroudn before I leave somewhere.
Could I ask a favour? Ven ^^ When you correct my letter, Please mark on corrected sentences using other color.
It helps me check my incorrect sentences esaily.
Thnak you Ven ^^


Hi~ I came up something urgent so I delayed our English class.
I lost my card wallet. Many cards were in there. I found out that my card wallet wasn't in my shoulder bag.
But, it was already late. So I went to the gym as soon as I wake up.
I didn't found my card wallet at  the fitting room and also in the bathroom so I asked the gym's clerk to call me, if they found my wallet. ㅠㅠㅠ
And then I went to the gym again to look around the fitting room when there wasn't a lot of people. Fortunely, I was able to find my wallet on the other locker. Maybe someone used the locker I used and put down my wallet involuntarily. Anyway, it was over. It scared the hell out of me. From now on, I need to get the habit of looking around before I leave somewhere.
Could I ask a favour? Ven ^^ When you correct my letter, Please mark on corrected sentences using other color.
It helps me check my incorrect sentences easily.
Thank you Ven ^^


Hi! I something urgent came up so I put our class on hold.
I lost my wallet. There were many cards there. It was already late when I found out that my wallet wasn't in my shoulder bag.
So I went to the gym as soon as I wake up.I didn't find my wallet at the fitting room and even in the bathroom so I asked the gym's clerk to call me, if they found my wallet.
And then I went to the gym again to look around the fitting room when there weren’t a lot of people. Fortunately, I was able to find my wallet in the other locker. Maybe someone used the locker that I used and left my wallet. Anyway, it was over. It scared the hell out of me. From now on, I need to make it a habit to look around before I leave somewhere.Could I ask you a favour, Ven? When you correct my letter, please mark my mistakes in the sentences with a different color.
It helps me check my mistakes in the sentences easily.
Thank you, Ven!

 

 

 

 

 


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