Nice to meet you, I'm Ha Nin.

I'm 22 living in Seoul.
I'm in 4th grade of university, and my major is economic. But i'm taking a semester off now.
Because i want to go on a trip and study something other than econimic! like English, Programming, Japanese etc..!
i have many hobby, one of them is watching football.
I love 'Mancity' of U.K Football team. So i am travling to U.K next month.
That is why i have to study English hard!
And the others are watching Kpop video, playing soccor, playing a game!
I love all of them!

I'm 22 and I'm living in Seoul.
I'm in 4th year of university, and my major is economics. But i'm taking a semester off now.
Because i want to go on a trip and study something other than studying econimics! Like English, Programming, Japanese etc.
I have many hobbies, one of them is watching footbal gamel.
I love 'Mancity' of U.K Football team. So I will travel to U.K next month.
That is why I have to study English hard.
And the others are watching Kpop video, playing soccer and playing game.
I love all of them!

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Him Ha Nin. I appreicate your effort in making a composititon here. Please avoid using this "!" in most of your sentences.