Day 4 of homework

2022.01.01

요청내용

Am i allowed to tell you my stories of mandatory military service before?

Before beginning that, i had to prepare the stuff like shaving it all off...haha.

So. i went to the Barber and sit down there and then i told hair stylists that just give me a buzz cut!!

and he was like oh you have a plan to go to the military okay let me shave it all off for you.

after getting a hair cut, he said you definitely pull off buzz cut well but i didn't believe what he said.

because when i look at myself in the mirror, i thought it's not good for me.

Anyway, I'm never going for buzz cut after mandatory military service.

These day, i went to the salon and i was just like a trim please or shorten bang and sideburns just a little,

and shave the back of my neck a little higher yeah that's all im doing at there.

첨삭내용

Am I allowed to tell you my story about the mandatory military service before? Well, before I enter it, I have to prepare kinds of stuff like shaving my head off or shaving it all off..haha.

So, I went to the barber and sat down there, and then I told the hairstylists to just give me a buzz cut!!

And he was like. '' Oh, you have a plan to go to the military, okay let me shave it all off for you.''

After getting a haircut, he said "'You pull off the buzz cut well! '' But I didn't believe what he said.

Because when I looked at myself in the mirror, I thought it was not good for me.

Anyway, I'm never going for a buzz cut ever again after that obligatory service.

These days, I went to the salon and I was just wanna have a trim, shorten the bangs , just a little clean-cut on the side burns,and shave the back of my neck a little higher from the nape.

And that's how I always wanted my hair. I never had full-grown hair before as I always want it short. But if I am not an office worker I might wanna try to dye my hair to a lighter shade of brown perhaps.

A proper noun is a specific (i.e., not generic) name for a particular person, place, or thing. Proper nouns are always capitalized in English, no matter where they fall in a sentence. Because they endow nouns with a specific name, they are also sometimes called proper names.

A common noun is the generic name for a person, place, or thing in a class or group. Unlike proper nouns, a common noun is not capitalized unless it either begins a sentence or appears in a title. ... All nouns can be classified as either common or proper. All nouns name something, but proper nouns name them specifically.

Corrections: Just be mindful of the usage of the ''I'' ,it should be capitalized without exemption. Capitalize the pronoun I.

Pronouns are words that replace nouns. I, you, and me are all examples of pronouns. While you and me are usually lowercase, the pronoun I should always be capitalized, regardless of where it appears in a sentence. All sentences should start with a capital letter.

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