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I just name John "J" and David "D"

D : John how have you been? It's been a while

J : Wow..fancy meeting you here. I'm nothing particular and you?

D : Nothing special too. Do you have a time on Saturdays?

J : I don't have any plan yet.

D : So why don't we try beach volleyball? The competition of a beach volleyball will be held on 31th of December in Cebu

J : How did you know I would like to play beach volleyball with you

D : Because I'm your close friend. haha These day I'm literally into it

J : So where are we meeting at? which beach?

D : We will meet at the Sea of Incheon which is close from here

J : Okay. See you on Saturday bye!!!!!!!

I just name John "J" and David "D"

D : John how have you been? It's been a while.

J : Wow..fancy meeting you here. ( I'm nothing particular and you?) Here in your sentence means :  I am not important.And you? You should say ...Oh,nothing in particular.: This means,Oh nothing special, I am free and not busy at all. 

D : Nothing special too. Do you have a time on Saturdays?

J : I don't have any plan yet.

D : So why don't we try beach volleyball? The competition of a beach volleyball will be held on 31th of December in Cebu

J : How did you know I would like to play beach volleyball with you

D : Because I'm your close friend. haha These day I'm literally into it

J : So where are we meeting at? which beach?

D : We will meet at the Sea of Incheon which is close from here

J : Okay. See you on Saturday bye!!!!!!!

 



 

I just name John "J" and David "D"
 
D: John, how have you been? It's been a while
 
J: Wow. I fancy meeting you here. Oh, nothing in particular, and you?
 
D: Nothing special too. Do you have time on Saturdays?
 
J: I don't have any plan yet.
 
D: So why don't we try beach volleyball? The competition of beach volleyball will be held on the 31st in Cebu.
J: How did you know I would like to play beach volleyball with you
 
D: Because I'm your close friend. haha These days I'm literally into it.
 
J: So where are we meeting at? which beach?
 
D: We will meet at the Sea of Incheon which is close from here.
 
J: Okay. See you on Saturday bye!!!!!!!
 
 
Very good John! Nice script! Thank you for using a different activity this time. haha I had made some little corrections in some parts.Okay? Just be mindful with the use of the ''ordinal numbers'' 
Like the word 31st thirty first and not 31th thirtyoneth? That's all. Thank you. Well done! 

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