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It's so cold now. I need to turn on the heater which I don't like because of irritating my skin.

It wasn't that cold last week while my wife was here. Even neither in Korea.
When My wife was packing for her travel to Korea, I was saying that you'd prefer not to bring thick clothes
as it will be warm. According to the forecasting in Korea a certain area would reach 30 degree celsius during my wife is in Korea. So she wouldn't bring any thick jackets as what I recommended.

During the first week, It was warm. I would say it's hot. So I told her smugly that I'm right. However It has become so cold. The cold wave came to Korea. The forecasting saying that it will be zero degree celsious and it's the coldest weather in 60 years. I got yelled at as she doesn't have proper clothes for the weather now in Korea. I said it's a bless in disguise because now you are allow to buy new jackets without any hesitating.

It has been getting cold and now it became the time to turn on the heater otherwise It's too cold to sleep. The winter has arrived here and it will be first one in Toronto to us.

It's so cold now. I need to turn on the heater which I don't like because it irratates my skin.

It wasn't that cold last week while my wife was here. Even neither in Korea.
When My wife was packing for her travel to Korea, I was saying that you'd prefer not to bring thick clothes
as it will be warm. According to the forecasting in Korea a certain area would reach 30 degrees celsius during my wife is in Korea. So she wouldn't bring any thick jackets as what I recommended.

During the first week, It was warm. I would say it's hot. So I told her smugly that I'm right. However, It has become so cold. The cold wave came to Korea. The forecasting saying that it will be zero degrees celsius and it's the coldest weather in 60 years. I got yelled at as she doesn't have proper clothes for the weather now in Korea. I said it's a blessing in disguise because now you are allowed to buy new jackets without any hesitating.

It has been getting cold and now it became the time to turn on the heater otherwise It's too cold to sleep. The winter has arrived here and it will be the first one in Toronto for us.


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